just like a deep-red ball. at the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉,小升初英语记叙文写作指导,文章的客观性很强,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感,用第三人称叙述,如: a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. the sun was very red,记和叙都离不开动