过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好,但她没有,合理恰当地使用省略句,更富表现力,→ i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.英语写作提分的诀窍,→ by the window sat a young woman. we’ll go. if not, but she didn’t. enjoy,· as i didn’t know her address, they all jumped for joy.就会立刻想起like,·